City Life vs. Country Life

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http://glassvisage.hubpages.com/hub/Country-vs-City-Life

Which text do you prefer. Who do you agree with more? Write a letter to the person giving your opinion. Choose one text to answer to, either agreeing or disagreeing.

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42 Responses to City Life vs. Country Life

  1. Fabian de la Rosa says:

    I choose the first text

    Dear writer

    I´ve been in a farm too. That was nice because of the nature, the nice landscapes, the animals and the fresh air, but I liked it just for few days. Then it was boring because every day I did always the same and I wanted to come back to the city. That´s why I agree with you about living in the city because in the city there are a lot of things that we cannot find in the countryside such as: big shopping centers, nice restaurants and clubs for dancing. Even in the city we can have hot water for taking a shower, internet, gyms, technology and so on. Also in the city we can progress more. We can go to school later to the university and then we can get a good job. Besides if you need something you can get it easily. It´s ok going for vacation to the countryside but for these reasons I think city life is better than country life.

    • Gabriel Obando says:

      Check these mistakes:
      That was nice – It was nice
      I liked it just for few days. – I just liked it for a few days.
      I did always the same – I always did the same.
      We can go to school later to the university – We can go to school and later, even to the university

      It was a nice paragraph. Try to include more description to make it more intereting.
      Your grade is: 4,5

  2. Camilo Arciniega says:

    I choose the first

    Dear writer

    Living in a farm is very nice. There are many things that you can do but, after days of staying in the same place is too boring. I think life in the city is better than staying in a farm. Landscapes and the fresh air are great but, you also need the city. You can do things such as going dancing, going shopping or simply staying in a park with your friends. A farm is nice to be on vacations. That is the reason because I prefer to stay in a city.

    • Gabriel Obando says:

      Check these mistakes:
      after days of staying in the same place is too boring – Every verb needs a subject – after days of staying in the same place it gets too boring.
      to be on vacations. The word vacation is always singular.
      Wrong word. That is the reason because – That is the reason why…

      This was too short, you didn’t get your point of view accross.

      Your grade is: 3,5

  3. Camila Cortés says:

    Dear writer:
    I’m a student in Pasto, Colombia. I’m writing to you because I want to tell you that I agree with your ideas. I prefer the city too, though the country is a beautiful place. How you said, the city always has something going to on-events, new restaurants, etc., For example, when I’m bored, I can go out with my friends to shops, restaurants, parks, go to the movies. The city is an interesting place. However, it doesn’t mean that I don’t like the country. I have relatives in a country. I frequently visit them, and when I go there I enjoy the nature. It’s exciting stay there only for few hours or one day. I imagine that country life is different and more demanding. in the country all the things I’m used to doing, would become difficult. Obviously, I say that for the reason that I have lived in the city since I was born. It’s great can share my ideas with your ideas. Thank you.

    • Gabriel Obando says:

      Check the following mistakes:
      Wrong word – The expression is: As you said, not how you said.
      the city always has something going to – the city always has something going on: events, new restaurants, etc.
      I have relatives in a country. – a country is different than the country. You wanted to say in the country.
      Grammar – It’s exciting stay . It’s exiting to stay…
      Capital letter to begin a sentence – in the country all the things I’m used to doing, would become difficult. This idea is not clear.
      Grammar – It’s great can share my ideas with your ideas. It’s great to share my ideas and compare the to your ideas. (You can’t share my ideas with your ideas).

      Be careful with small mistakes that don’t allow the reader to enjoy what you write.

      Your grade: 4,2

  4. Paola Chamorro says:

    Dear Writer,

    I have read your article about the country living and I would like giving my opinion. I am disagree with some ideas and I will make known why is good to live in it.
    First, you wrote that you feel sorry for your friends were surrounded by asphalt and power lines. This makes it seem like the life in the city is humdrum and sad. That’s no true, the city never sleeps. The nightlife is exciting and the shops keeping open until it’s late. You and your family can enjoy the leisure time in many places.
    Second, you said that the only people you know they are sick because of bad food. The life in the city doesn’t mean to have an unhealthy habits. It depends of the person. Many people here practice some sport in the parc or the gym, for instance. In my case, I don’t like the fast food and it’s easier for me buy the wholesome food in the supermarket.
    But I think the city living is fast sometimes, as you said. We must move from side to side, having to bear the noise, stress, etc. In the country, the wonderful sky at nights, the air fresh, the quietness and the sunrises are incomparable.
    There are advantages and disadvantages both city and country, but I would prefer the city. Although, I’ve had chances going to visit the country and it’s very nice. So, it’s a good thing that there are people like you who continue to believe country living is best.

    Sincerely,
    Paola Chamorro

    • Gabriel Obando says:

      Check these mistakes:
      I would like giving my opinion. Grammar – I would like to give my opinion.
      I am disagree with some ideas – Grammar – You say: I agree or I disagree.
      I will make known why is good to live in it. This is not clear. – I would let you know why it is good to live in the city. (You said it but you haven’t mentioned what it referes to)
      you feel sorry for your friends were surrounded by asphalt – You feel sorry for your friends that live surrounded by asphalt. OR You feel sorry your friends were surrounded by asphalt.
      The shops keeping open until it’s late. – Grammar – The shops keep open until late.
      to have an unhealthy habits. Grammar – You write an and use the plural after. You should write – to have unhealthy habits.
      Spelling – the parc – The park.
      Check article use – I don’t like the fast food – I don’t like fast food. – It’s easier for me buy the wholesome food in the supermarket. – It’s easier for me buy wholesome food in the supermarket.
      Grammar – In the country, the wonderful sky at nights, the air fresh, the quietness and the sunrises are incomparable. – In the country, the wonderful sky at night, the fress air, the quietness of the place and the sunrises are incomparable.
      Grammar – There are advantages and disadvantages both city and country. There are advantages and disadvantages in both the city and the country …
      There are advantages and disadvantages both city and country.- There are advantages and disadvantages of both, living in the city and living in the country …
      continue to believe country living is best. – continue to believe country living is the best.

      Check the grammar. Almost every sencence has a small mistake. Revise your work before you post, I think many mistakes are just careless mistakes.

      Your grade is: 4,0

  5. Milena Caicedo says:

    To give an opinion about City Life or country life is concerning to our lives because it depends of experiences and preferences of each one. I think the second text has some real points of view but I prefer the first text because it has the most correct information about my city and it’s applicable to my life.

    Dear writer,

    I agree with you about some points of view and I want give you my opinion. I think that city requires big needs but city gives us everything we need to attend them. I don’t feel good living in a small town because it has few things and places to find there. Bugs and country daily life aren’t a big problem for me but I know it’s hard, difficult and it’s a little more monotonous than city. To live in country you need working in the fields and farm animals, everyone can’t do farm work. I’ve gone the countryside on vacations too. In country there are moments to share all kinds of natural experiences. It was a relaxing experience. I liked walking, fresh air, seeing beautiful views on day and night and to know good and kind people. Sometimes is really good to go away of noise, pollution and daily routine of city, but it just on vacations because for me city is the best place, I grow up in Pasto. I also know it depends of where we’ve lived the most important moments of our lives and I learned the most things here. Finally, I also prefer city because it’s changing and it has most opportunities. I know it’s most dangerous like drugs, alcohol and gangs but for me living in city is most important about education, current trends, science and technology developments. You can meet different people with new beliefs and thoughts. For all this we must give value to the two places.

    • Gabriel Obando says:

      Check these grammar mistakes:
      To give an opinion about City Life or country life is concerning to our lives because it depends of experiences and preferences of each one. – To give an opinion about city life or country life concerns our lives because it depends on experiences and preferences of each one.
      I agree with you about some points of view – I agree with some of your points of view.
      I think that city requires big needs but city gives us everything we need to attend them. This ideas is not very clear. Do you mean this: I think that living in the city requires having big needs, but the cities give us everything we need to live in them.
      I don’t feel good living in a small town because it has few things and places to find there. – Just use one idea per sentence. Don’t try to put together things that have nothing to do with one onother. This is the first idea: I don’t feel good living in a small town because it has few things. And this is the second idea: There are also very few places you can find there. The two ideas together don’t make sence.
      Bugs and country daily life aren’t a big problem for me but I know it’s hard, difficult and it’s a little more monotonous than city. The same problem as before. You are putting ideas together that don’t have nothing to do with oneanother. What do bugs have to do with country live being more monotonous than city life?

      You need to write complete sentences, check your grammar, and make sure your ideas are clear. You need to revice what you write many times.

      Your grade is: 2,5

  6. Valeria Eraso says:

    Dear writer,

    I agree with you, for me country life is better than city life. Well, it is true when you said that city life is much less healthy and the reasons you gave. I believe that in the city we are more prone to diseases like stress because of life rhythm. For example, you need everyday take transport to arrive anyplace for working, studying, eating, etc. Also, you walk if the place is not far but always there are a lot of people on the streets. Sometimes they are not very kind always thinking in job or study for getting money but less interesting of the whole person as the spiritual life or feeling good about themselves. While country life makes you feel calm, you breathe fresh air as well as you see and have contact with animals and the wonderful nature.

    Now I am living in a city, I need city because of circumstances life. So I have learned to live with all city life problems such as more diseases, delinquency, dependence of technology, fierce competition for your interests, etc. At the same time I recognize city offers to me a lot options to enjoy such as theaters, discos, cinemas, restaurants, libraries and other interesting places but never more interesting than nature. At the moment I am studying at University and maybe I will be working in the city but I am able to the change. It means I could live in the country if I decided do it. At least I am sure I do it when I will be an aged person. So I think you are living a good life there.

    Sincerely,
    Valeria Eraso

    • Gabriel Obando says:

      Check these mistakes:
      Well, it is true when you said that city life is much less healthy and the reasons you gave. – The reasons you gave… what? The reasons you gave are great? The reasons you gave support your point of view? You didn’t write anything about the reasons.
      …because of life rhythm. … because of the rythm of life.
      For example, you need everyday take transport to arrive anyplace for working, studying, eating, etc – For example, everyday you need to take transport to arrive somewhere for working, studying, eating, etc.
      Sometimes they are not very kind (, they are) always thinking in (their) job or study for getting money but (they are) less interesting (wrong word) (interested in) the whole person as the spiritual life or feeling good about themselves.
      This idea has no connectio with the rest of the text. – While country life makes you feel calm, you breathe fresh air as well as you see and have contact with animals and the wonderful nature.
      Now I am living in a city, I need city because of circumstances life. – Now I am living in a city, I need the city because of the circumstances of life.
      I recognize city offers to me a lot options to enjoy… – I recognize the city offers me a lot options to enjoy life, such as …
      These ideas are not clear : I will be working in the city but I am able to the change. It means I could live in the country if I decided do it. At least I am sure I do it when I will be an aged person.

      Most of your ideas are interesting, but the mistakes make them unclear and you get lost in the reading. Please go over your grammar and recheck your writing before you post.

      Your grade is : 3,8

  7. Diana Erazo says:

    I chose the second one.
    Dear writer:
    I’m writing this letter because I have read your article about country life and I’d like to share with you my opinion .I agree with the most part of lines you expose in the text .I think country life is a little bit better than city life for the next reasons.
    When you live in the country, you can get relax because there is no much noise that let you get stress like in the city .You feel the air more peaceful .You can appreciate nature and beautiful landscapes .You also enjoy feeding animals or smelling the fresh flower’s smell. Even the food is healthier since you have natural milk and eggs .So that is better.
    I know that in the country you cannot find all those things you find in the city, but it is not a problem if you have some access to get to the city, so no matter about that .Some people say that life country is so hard but I think it is no true just in the country, but in the city too. It depends on how is your rhythm life and wherever you live, you have to do many demanding activities.
    Concluding, I ‘d like so much to live in the country because is a peaceful and beautiful place to live and I don’t mind if I don’t have all advantages that in the city I do; taking into account some ideas you express in the article with those that I strongly agree.
    Sincerely
    Diana Erazo.

  8. LORENA HERNANDEZ says:

    I agree with the first text.

    Dear writer:
    I agree with your opinion.
    I like live in the countryside ,because is a place quieter where I can enjoy of beautiful landscapes, access to food, breathe fresh air , heard birds, relaxing, and climbing tress it is fun for me.
    Live in the city is great for some people, because they can visit different places interesting as restaurants, stores , parks, but for me is more comfortable enjoy of nature.
    In the countryside I don’t need to pay rent or public services.
    In my opinion I‘d like have animals as: hens, fish, cows, goats, horses, rabbits.
    I lived six months in the farm. It was a great experience. I lived in Bogotá, but for family reason I had to live for months in the field. At first was very bored, because I wasn’t used to live in the field. I will not forget that many accidents of which I learned many things for example milk a cow.
    I think that live in city and then live in the country is a big change. But just matters of taking fond of the place you live in my case was living in the country for few months leaving behind friends, frills and change them weak up early to care for animals.
    I will not forget that when live in the field I learned to cook and defend me when I need it most!!

  9. Kelly coral says:

    (According to the first text)

    Dear writer,

    I am writing to give my opinion about your article. You write good points about life in the city and I agree with you.
    Living in the country is beautiful because it’s more relaxing and there isn’t pollution, so you can breathe fresh air and you can be in contact with the animals but I always will prefer the city. I have lived in the city since I was born and for me living in the city is very important. In my opinion when to live in the city you can get everything easily and you are happier because you have indispensible things to live such as technology, electricity, and more possibilities to educate you. These you will probably never you will find in the country.
    I strongly agree when you say that Living in the city means being around more stores, people, jobs, and fewer distances to get from one place to another because it`s true and I know it for my experience. Also in the city you can enjoy more because you can go out with your friends to different places. The city people often do pleasant things. For example, you can go shopping, eat in nice restaurants, go to the cinema or go to some parties. Moreover there are more chances of get some job and you can stick out in the life because there are a lot of schools and universities. For all these reasons, I think city living is the best. I believe that ever will change the living the city for nothing in the world.

    Sincerely,
    Kelly Coral

  10. kevin cuaran says:

    I choose the second
    Dear writer
    I read your text, I not agree but you’re right one thing, all is not nice. City has dangers and you’ve be careful. Not all places are safe you can to get drugs, see violence, and people die every day but you can a lot of enjoy too if you go to safe places. You can go restaurant, drink and dance in a nightclub, watch movies in the theater, etc. and all places are near for you. If you got problems the police may help you or somebody. Not all food is bad you can get healthy food for example, apples, and cereal. If you want practice sports or run all cities have parks. So for me live in the city is better than in the country. You can’t be bored.
    Sincerely
    Kevin Cuaran

    • Gabriel Obando says:

      I not agree
      City has
      you’ve be careful
      you can to get drugs
      see violence

      Too many grammar mistakes. Check punctuation. 2,5
      grade 3,5

  11. Danilo Burgos says:

    Dear writer
    I agree with you. The countryside is a place where you are okay. You can breathe fresh air, look beautiful landscapes, and you can go outskirts of the town. The life in countryside is healthy. But, you in few days you are bored. Because you cannot find things that you like. The city life is innovating with technologies to do easier your life. The city life is better than the country life. Because, you can do other kind of things. Such as: you can go shopping, you can go to the supermarket, you can enjoy with your friends in different places. Also, make friends in a city is easier, you can find people in wherever. But, if you want, you can go once a while to countryside. It is better in vacations to be relaxed. Finally, the city life is better to me. I like avoid issues with the countryside. I like the city life. Thank you.

    Sincerely,
    Danilo Burgos.

  12. HERMAN PASTAS says:

    My dear friend
    As you know, I am visiting my family in the country. I feel many things are different here. For instance there are a lot of fruit trees. So if I want to take any fruit I just take it . in the city you can get any fruit but from counter in the supermarket. There is a lovely weather also. We can go for a stroll wearing shorts and t-shirts which make us feel comfortable.
    People are very kindly. They greet you by every where shaking hands, moving heads, waving hands etc. they are not so hostile or friendly as people in the city. Something that I do not really like is that people uses their mobiles by every where too.
    I think wireless technology items produce wave radiating witch generates other kind of pollutions but frankly speaking I feel some tranquility in the country. I need it in order to organize my daily coming activities some facts which I miss from the city are the home delivery services offered by restaurants because some times I do not want to cook I miss the movie theatres also because I do not want to lose the premiers . so even I feel too comfortable here I know that I have to go back .
    See you soon
    Sincerely,

    Monica Eufemia Carpio Cordoba

  13. Monica Eufemia Carpio Cordoba says:

    My dear friend
    As you know, I am visiting my family in the country. I feel many things are different here. For instance there are a lot of fruit trees. So if I want to take any fruit I just take it . in the city you can get any fruit but from counter in the supermarket. There is a lovely weather also. We can go for a stroll wearing shorts and t-shirts which make us feel comfortable.
    People are very kindly. They greet you by every where shaking hands, moving heads, waving hands etc. they are not so hostile or friendly as people in the city. Something that I do not really like is that people uses their mobiles by every where too.
    I think wireless technology items produce wave radiating witch generates other kind of pollutions but frankly speaking I feel some tranquility in the country. I need it in order to organize my daily coming activities some facts which I miss from the city are the home delivery services offered by restaurants because some times I do not want to cook I miss the movie theatres also because I do not want to lose the premiers . so even I feel too comfortable here I know that I have to go back .
    See you soon
    Sincerely

    Monica Eufemia Carpio Cordoba

  14. Camila Enriquez- Willy Enriquez says:

    Dear writer

    We read your letter, and we wanted to write you back. You make some good points about life in the country and we agree with you. We think that your ideas are really good.
    We grew up in the country too, and we love it. We have the same opinion about the country life. For example, when you say the country is healthier. We strong believe in that because if you are in the country you can breathe pure and fresh air. We also think the country is cleaner. Sometimes people in our villages pick up trash of roads to keep it cleaner. Another point that we liked is when you say “I would never trade in my memories of playing in a stream, climbing trees galore “. This sentence remembered us our childhood because we live that kind of experience. We really liked to climb trees. Until now we watch them, and we feel like to climb them like before.
    Respect our families; our grandparents grow their own products for their livelihood. They sit outside during evenings to tell stories about their lives when they were young. In relation to animals, in our villages are common too. Obviously there are not lions or coyotes, but there are foxes, deer, a lot of kinds of birds, snakes, etc. some of them cause troubles to the farmers. For example, foxes eat chickens and birds eat seeds. It is a fight between farmers and animals.
    Finally, we are living in the city, and we think to live in the city or in the country have their advantages and disadvantages, we still believe it is better to live in the country. Also, we can always come to visit the country to be with our families.

    Sincerely,
    Camila Enriquez
    Willy Enriquez

  15. Diego Cajiao says:

    Dear writer

    I completely agree with you, country life is better than the city, because sometimes you need to escape from all the troubles of the city, and go to country is the best choice to do it. It gives you a chance to appreciate nature, to relax and think about yourself. Also the atmosphere is pretty nice; the singing of the birds, beautiful sunrises and landscapes. That is something that brings you peace and tranquility.
    Maybe in country you can’t find all the comforts than the city, but you don’t care of that. There are other things that make you feel good, such as, healthy food and water, also country people are very kind and friendly.They are very hardworking men. You can learn a lot of them.
    So, I hope to have a time in country to get peace and be one with nature.

    Sincerely,
    Diego Cajiao

  16. ANGÉLICA BELALCAZAR CHAVES says:

    I agree with the first text.

    Dear Nlpolak
    Thanks for your post. I agree with you. I am a city girl, and I love country too. When I go to the country I enjoy it, but I cannot stay there too long. I think stay there for 3 or 4 weeks is nice. But when you are there more than one month gets boring. I always enjoy the city because there are many things to do. Sometimes city comes boring or you get stressed. In that moment is perfect to take a time to stay in contact with nature. That helps you to relax and forget all your problems. In Colombia, countries are a little different than in your country. Neighbors are not too away to each other. They are close to you, and they can help you when you need a hand. There are few places that are far away from their neighbors.
    I often go to the country but there I cannot have things that I have in the city. I love technology and the easy internet access. In the country you can found technology too, but is poor. That is way I cannot stay in country more than 4 weeks.
    I hope you keep in touch with nature at least twice a year. Thanks for reading.

    Sincerely

    Angélica Belalcázar
    San Juan de Pasto (Colombia)

  17. ANDREA CANACUAN♥♥ says:

    I read your article of country life and city life. I agree with you, the country life is very hard because the people wake up early for begin their work, they milk the cows, grow the land. The country and city life are complicated because in both have a tight schedule. I prefer country life because you don´t need a job because you work in your farm, there is easier access to food, cheaper products. Also the country life it´s quieter you are relax, you breathe fresh air, the kids have a great sense of responsibility and you have a healthy life.

    However Life in the city is stressful because people think that haven´t got time. Most city kids get into trouble whit a drugs and alcohol, people depends of telephone.

    Finally I think that it´s better to live in the country because you learn much about the farm, and you have a healthy life.

  18. Mauricio Jojoa says:

    Dear Writer:

    In my childhood, I used to visit my grandmother’s house and I enjoy playing in the mud and with animals, it was amazing and it is my most important memory. I usually went on vacations and when they finished I did not want to come back home. Currently, I live in a city but I wish to live in a country because it is more peaceful than the city. Also as you said people who live in the country breathe healthy meanwhile in the city there is a lot of pollution because of the traffic, industries, technology and human’s behavior. Two relevant things that bother me are the noise and the stress and it produces people’s illnesses due to the style of life. My plan for the future is to buy a country house where I can live with my animals so I will plant my own food like vegetables and fruits which is a big advantage when living in a country because the products are going to be fresh and healthy. By the contrary the most popular food that you find in the city is fast food and if you find vegetables and fruits most of them are rotten. I thing that living in a city is expensive you have to paid for all the things. So speaking my mind I prefer the country rather than the city. I totally agree with you!

    Take care,

    Mauricio

  19. Carlos Jimenez says:

    I agree with the first text.

    Dear writer

    I agree with you because I live in a beautiful city and I sometimes go to the country. Country is a nice place, but I think it also may be bored. I have been for some days in the country. I realized that I miss my city. I have a lot of friends in the city and I go out with them. I need to see them and get fun. However, the city has a lot of pollution and stress, such as, people shouting, cars honking and thieves. But I enjoy these kinds of things. On the other hand, I like country because here is different. There are neighbors nearby. If you ask them something, they can help you. You can be in contact with nature, too. But, in the country there aren’t computers, internet and technology. So, it is a bad thing for me. I like to be in contact with my friends and people that I know.

    I would like you came to my country and you will realize what country life is here.

    Sincerely

    Carlos Jiménez
    Pasto, Nariño, Colombia.

    • Gabriel Obando says:

      may be bored – bored or boring?
      get fun – have fun
      I like country
      ask them something
      grade = 4,6

  20. Yamid Camilo Benavides says:

    I like the first article.
    Dear Writer:
    I agree with you because I think that living in the city is more enjoyable, the city life isn’t as hard as the country life, we can find a variety of things in a city and We haven’t to go far to search them. Although in the country we can breathe fresh air, the food is healthy and we can do things like fishing, go swimming, ride a horse, to go hunting, listen to music and watching television, but only for the peoples that are of visit or vacations, because people living in the place, they go to sleep early for the next day continue with their work, they have to go harvesting cultivating, planting etc. In change, the city work isn’t as hard and the people can have their hours of relax, we can study in differents schools, highs schools and universities, We can use technological advances such as computers, cell phones, We can visit interesting places , we can go to in the parks for do sports, etc. In conclusion, I prefer the city life because it is more funny.
    Sincerely:
    Yamid Camilo Benavides
    Pasto – Nariño

    • Gabriel Obando says:

      check punctuation. Don’t put sentences together with a comma.
      listen to music and watching television
      peoples
      are of visit or vacations
      for the next day continue
      to go harvesting cultivating, planting etc.
      for do sports

      your grade is 3,2

  21. Saira Dorado says:

    Dear writer.
    I lived a long time at country life.Is very nice to live there. You can to live a little more quiet in terms of safety and noise, you can breathe a more pleasant and healthy environment,almost always hot,
    you can going to enjoy of a swimming or walking with your friends or your relatives, and so other good and healthy activities.But, two years ago that i am living in the city. I can say the city life is more easy as you find many facilities and solutions to your problems. Here you can find big shopping centers, restaurants, clubs, good and several places for going to dancing and to be happy, you can have more opportunities for study, you find more resources as: internet, libraries, schools more developed is easier to make your future.Here you have the things more right away of course with money. For these reasons I agree with you,but for others reasons i think the country life is beautiful.
    Finally, city life vs country life have their advantages and disadvantages for living. Everyone choose in that place feel more comfortable. I feel me okay in both places.

    • Gabriel Obando says:

      Grammar mistakes
      I lived a long time at country life
      (It) Is very nice
      can to live
      can going to
      more easy
      the things more right away
      Everyone choose in that place feel more comfortable
      I feel me okay

      Saira you need to pay extra antenttion to grammar. You make too many mistakes. You are translating structures directly form English. My suggestion is read more and take a careful look at how sentences are written.

      Your grade is 2,8

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